This week we have been watching a video about Selfie cat, we had to watch the video very carefully and write a amazing piece of writing about it. I made a long story about it and I hope you like it, and have a great day😊😉😎.
W.A.L.T use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting and what is happening.
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Selfie Cat
One hot sunny day there was a fat cat named Cutie and Travis I’m opening my ipad. I click the instacat and i’m first in the instacat we got 2536 likes. My Cutie was woke up and he fell down he want go to cat toilets.
I’m watched to instacat but Roxy Gomez has been first because she has 13913 like. I saw Cutie going to cat toilets and Cutie. Then I want to get Cutie in the cat toilets. I pulled Cutie in the tail and we fall down.
Then me and Cutie go in the couch to take a pictures and I get the phone in my pocket. Then the first pictures I click no and second pictures I click no but Cutie kick me in the face. Then Cutie jump into back of the couch and I hold his tail me and Cutie fall down in the back of couch.
Then Cutie want go to cat toilets and I taken the phone. Then I pulled myself and click but the my first pictures was not really beautiful. I clicking no but Cutie bit me in my Shoulder.
I stand up with Cutie and i’m holding his tail am walking to pick up the phone. Then Cutie hold on the edge of piano and I’m pulling forward. Then Cutie is rage to looking at me and he is jump into the piano. Then he is scared me I fall down and the phone was hit by the ceiling and it’s click. Then Cutie was hurried because he want to go toilet and I’m crying because want to be first in the instacat. Then instacat surprised because my pictures is beautiful and I’m very happy.
The End
Hey Carl,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
You have written a very interesting piece of imaginative writing! You are a creative and an imaginative thinker! Your ideas in the story are all exciting and funny! Do you have a cat at home to take selfies with? I have a cat at home but it's really hard to take a proper picture with him because he moves all the time!
I really want to read more of your writing and comment on your learning! How about checking out the Summer Learning Journey page and choose some activities you like to do? There are heaps of interesting activities to choose from!
To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.