Hello guys. This last Mouth were doing the diorama because the teachers said to make a diorama and she will put this on the hall. So you have to draw your plan and that's your first step and after. Then you make your background after that you need a lot of materials from your plan but mine is not many of materials.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 28 June 2018
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Hi Joseph, this is Vann from HHS. I really liked your diorama, but I think that you should explain more about what a diorama for other people that doesn't know what a diorama is. Also I think you spelled month wrong. But I really liked your diorama and keep up the great work!
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Hi Joseph, Its Ranit here. You have done an awesome job on your plan and it looks great and awesome. I also wanted to ask that in your picture what is that brown thing in that paper looking nest? Also can you check your spellings beofre you post.
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How are you Joseph? This blogpost needs a little more description and explanation. Maybe you could've added more photos than only one, and maybe you should check your blogpost before posting it because sometimes grammars can be wrong and also punctuations so maybe you can work with that a little bit, nice blogpost though.
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